[lsd0001] branch master updated: fix some nits

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     new 9145566  fix some nits
9145566 is described below

commit 9145566b383c5f83a50d189fbd925a95683b721f
Author: Martin Schanzenbach <address@hidden>
AuthorDate: Tue May 26 16:26:38 2020 +0200

    fix some nits
---
 draft-schanzen-gns.xml | 34 +++++++++++++++++-----------------
 1 file changed, 17 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)

diff --git a/draft-schanzen-gns.xml b/draft-schanzen-gns.xml
index f1a9157..0060c41 100644
--- a/draft-schanzen-gns.xml
+++ b/draft-schanzen-gns.xml
@@ -154,7 +154,7 @@
        <dt>B</dt>
        <dd>
          is the group generator (X(P),Y(P)) of edwards25519 as defined in
-         <xref target="RFC7748" />.
+        <xref target="RFC7748" />.
        </dd>
        <dt>L</dt>
        <dd>
@@ -164,9 +164,8 @@
        <dd>
          is the ECDSA public key corresponding to d. It is defined in
          <xref target="RFC6979" /> as the curve point d*B where B is the group
-         generator of the elliptic curve.
-         The public key is used to uniquely identify a GNS zone and is 
referred to
-         as the "zone key".
+         generator of the elliptic curve. The public key is used to uniquely
+         identify a GNS zone and is referred to as the "zone key".
        </dd>
      </dl>
    </section>
@@ -448,8 +447,8 @@
          defines the BOX record format to box up SRV and TLSA records and
          include them in the record set of the label they are associated
          with.  For example, a
-         TLSA record for "_https._tcp.foo.gnu" will be stored in the record 
set of
-         "foo.gnu" as a BOX record with service (SVC) 443 (https) and protocol 
(PROTO) 6
+         TLSA record for "_https._tcp.example.org" will be stored in the 
record set of
+         "example.org" as a BOX record with service (SVC) 443 (https) and 
protocol (PROTO) 6
          (tcp) and record TYPE "TLSA".
          For reference, see also <xref target="RFC2782" />.
          A BOX DATA entry has the following format:
@@ -582,8 +581,7 @@ q := SHA512 (zk_h)
            is the 256-bit private zone key as defined in <xref target="zones" 
/>.
          </dd>
          <dt>label</dt>
-         <dd>
-           is a UTF-8 string under which the resource records are published.
+         <dd>is a UTF-8 string under which the resource records are published.
          </dd>
          <dt>d_h</dt>
          <dd>
@@ -1070,7 +1068,7 @@ BDATA := TWOFISH(K[32:63], IV[16:31],
          <section anchor="nick_processing" numbered="true" toc="default">
            <name>NICK</name>
            <t>
-             NIICK records are only relevant to the recursive resolver
+             NICK records are only relevant to the recursive resolver
              if the record set in question is the final result which is to
              be returned to the client. The encountered NICK records may either
              be supplemental (see <xref target="rrecords"/>) or
@@ -1086,9 +1084,9 @@ BDATA := TWOFISH(K[32:63], IV[16:31],
            </t>
        <figure>
          <artwork name="" type="" align="left" alt=""><![CDATA[
-Query: alice.doe (type=A)
+Query: alice.example (type=A)
 Result:
-A: 1.2.3.4
+A: 192.0.2.1
 NICK: eve
          ]]></artwork>
         </figure>
@@ -1102,9 +1100,9 @@ NICK: eve
         </t>
        <figure>
          <artwork name="" type="" align="left" alt=""><![CDATA[
-Query: alice.doe (type=A)
+Query: alice.example (type=AAAA)
 Result:
-A: 1.2.3.4
+AAAA: 2001:DB8::1
 NICK: john (Supplemental)
          ]]></artwork>
      </figure>
@@ -1146,6 +1144,7 @@ NICK: john (Supplemental)
          following parameters:
        </t>
        <artwork name="" type="" align="left" alt=""><![CDATA[
+<CODE BEGINS>
 S := "GnsRevocationPow" /* Salt, 16 byte */
 t := 3 /* Iterations */
 m := 1024 /* Memory size, 1 MiB */
@@ -1154,6 +1153,7 @@ p := 1 /* Parallelization parameter */
 v := 0x13 /* Version */
 y := 2 /* Type (Argon2id) */
 X, K are unused
+<CODE ENDS>
          ]]></artwork>
        <t>
          The following is the message string "P" on which the PoW is
@@ -1401,7 +1401,7 @@ Example name: www.example.<Base32(zk)>
    resolution SHOULD start from the respective local zone:
        </t>
        <artwork name="" type="" align="left" alt=""><![CDATA[
-Example name: www.example.gnu
+Example name: www.example.org
 Local zones:
 fr = (d0,zk0)
 gnu = (d1,zk1)
@@ -1422,10 +1422,10 @@ com = (d2,zk2)
    for the same suffix, the locally managed zone MUST have priority.
        </t>
        <artwork name="" type="" align="left" alt=""><![CDATA[
-Example name: www.example.gnu
+Example name: www.example.org
 Local suffix mappings:
 gnu = zk0
-example.gnu = zk1
+example.org = zk1
 example.com = zk2
 ...
 => Entry zone: zk1
@@ -1728,7 +1728,7 @@ b7a066dd
        </t>
        <artwork name="" type="" align="left" alt="">
          <![CDATA[
-           Zone private key (d, little-endian scalar):
+Zone private key (d, little-endian scalar):
 90ea2a95cb9ef482b45817dc45b805cae00f387022a065a3674f41ad15173c63
 
 Zone public key (zk):

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