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Re: [pooma-dev] [RFA]: Tutorial Typographical Changes
From: |
Jeffrey Oldham |
Subject: |
Re: [pooma-dev] [RFA]: Tutorial Typographical Changes |
Date: |
Mon, 26 Mar 2001 13:38:02 -0800 |
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Mutt/1.2.5i |
Would someone be willing to review these proposed changes or
tell me if I missed a reply email?
Thanks,
Jeffrey D. Oldham
address@hidden
On Wed, Mar 21, 2001 at 12:42:49PM -0800, Jeffrey Oldham wrote:
> Attached are proposed changes to some of the Pooma tutorials in
> r2/docs. Most are minor typographical changes. More questionable
> changes are annotated with "?" in the left column below.
>
> OK to commit?
>
> Wed Mar 21 12:03:54 2001 Jeffrey D. Oldham <address@hidden>
>
> * background.html (struct AddOp): Match parameter name with
> parameter use.
> (struct MulOp): Likewise.
> * tut-02.html: Add several missing spaces.
> ? (RBJacobi): Change array's name to match previous line.
> (Periodic Boundary Conditions): Fix line numbers for ApplyPeriodic.
> * tut-04.html: Move sentence regarding component forwarding from
> next paragraph to preceding paragraph concerning component
> forwarding.
> Remove an extra space and an extraneous comma. Add a missing
> parenthesis. Fix array's name to match the other text.
> ? Emphasize "ghost," which is implicitly defined.
> ? Reword last sentence to de\"{e}mphasize Pooma developers' programming
> expertise.
> (accumulateWithLoop): Substitute "first0" and "last0" for "f0" and
> "l0". "l0" looks like the number 10.
> Remove some extraneous words.
> * tut-06.html: "Recurring," not "recursing."
> * tut-07.html: Remove extraneous word. Fix a comma. Fix
> capitalization. Remove one of double word.
> Add space between closing ">" in nested template.
> ? s/VectorFace/VectorFaceRCTag/g
> Change expression font to typewriter.
> s/>/</ in line 016 of n-D scalar advection.
> ? * tut-08.html: (average): Change second "Expression1_t" to
> "Expression2_t".
> (Exported typedefs): Remove second, extraneous
> "SurfaceNormalsArray_t".
> Fix typo. Remove second of two contiguous periods. Remove second
> of repeated world.
> Suggested substitution s/right/correct/ to avoid confusion with
> "left".
> ? (FieldStencil example): Add ending ";". s/fv/vv/ to match
> previous variable declaration.
> Fix misspelled words. Add period at the end of a sentence.
>
> Thanks,
> Jeffrey D. Oldham
> address@hidden
tutA.patch
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