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Avoiding the passive voice
From: |
Richard Stallman |
Subject: |
Avoiding the passive voice |
Date: |
Tue, 18 Dec 2001 23:00:10 -0700 (MST) |
This language environment is almost the same as Latin-2,
but default input method is set to \"slovak\",
! and the Slovak tutorial is selected."))
This is correct English (well, almost, since it really needs "the" in
front of "default input method"), but it would be better to avoid the
passive voice:
This language environment is almost the same as Latin-2,
but sets the default input method to \"slovak\",
! and selects the Slovak tutorial."))
The passive voice tends to reduce readability and often makes
the text less clear--so please try to avoid it whenever you can.
Werner, could you fix these changes to be active?
- Avoiding the passive voice,
Richard Stallman <=