www/philosophy rms-aj.html rms-on-radio-nz.html

[Therese Godefroy]

CVSROOT:        /webcvs/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Therese Godefroy <th_g> 19/05/20 04:45:06

Modified files:
        philosophy     : rms-aj.html rms-on-radio-nz.html 

Log message:
        Reword the note.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/rms-aj.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.14&r2=1.15
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/rms-on-radio-nz.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.22&r2=1.23

Patches:
Index: rms-aj.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /webcvs/www/www/philosophy/rms-aj.html,v
retrieving revision 1.14
retrieving revision 1.15
diff -u -b -r1.14 -r1.15
--- rms-aj.html 19 May 2019 18:23:13 -0000      1.14
+++ rms-aj.html 20 May 2019 08:45:04 -0000      1.15
@@ -694,8 +694,8 @@
 <ol>
   <li id="f1">[2019] We call it <a
 href="/philosophy/why-call-it-the-swindle.html">the Swindle</a>
-because it's designed to swindle readers out of the freedoms they have
-with traditional books.</li>
+because it's designed to swindle readers out of the traditional
+freedoms of readers of books books.</li>
 </ol>
 
 </div><!-- for id="content", starts in the include above -->
@@ -755,7 +755,7 @@
 
 <p class="unprintable">Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2019/05/19 18:23:13 $
+$Date: 2019/05/20 08:45:04 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>

Index: rms-on-radio-nz.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /webcvs/www/www/philosophy/rms-on-radio-nz.html,v
retrieving revision 1.22
retrieving revision 1.23
diff -u -b -r1.22 -r1.23
--- rms-on-radio-nz.html        19 May 2019 18:23:13 -0000      1.22
+++ rms-on-radio-nz.html        20 May 2019 08:45:04 -0000      1.23
@@ -962,10 +962,10 @@
 <div class="column-limit"></div>
 <h3 style="font-size: 1.2em">Footnote</h3>
 <ol>
-  <li id="f1">[2019] We now call it <a
+  <li id="f1">[2019] We call it <a
 href="/philosophy/why-call-it-the-swindle.html">the Swindle</a>
-because it's designed to swindle readers out of the freedoms they have
-with traditional books.</li>
+because it's designed to swindle readers out of the traditional
+freedoms of readers of books books.</li>
 </ol>
 
 </div><!-- for id="content", starts in the include above -->
@@ -1029,7 +1029,7 @@
 
 <p class="unprintable">Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2019/05/19 18:23:13 $
+$Date: 2019/05/20 08:45:04 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>