www/proprietary proprietary-interference.html

[Richard M. Stallman]

CVSROOT:        /web/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Richard M. Stallman <rms>       18/12/26 06:44:36

Modified files:
        proprietary    : proprietary-interference.html 

Log message:
        Reword the description of what this page covers.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/proprietary/proprietary-interference.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.42&r2=1.43

Patches:
Index: proprietary-interference.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /web/www/www/proprietary/proprietary-interference.html,v
retrieving revision 1.42
retrieving revision 1.43
diff -u -b -r1.42 -r1.43
--- proprietary-interference.html       15 Dec 2018 14:02:42 -0000      1.42
+++ proprietary-interference.html       26 Dec 2018 11:44:36 -0000      1.43
@@ -19,10 +19,9 @@
 detriment of the users they ought to serve.</p>
 
 <p>
-This page describes how various proprietary programs mess up the
-user's system. They are like sabotage, but they are not grave enough
-to qualify for the word &ldquo;sabotage&rdquo;. Nonetheless, they are nasty and
-wrong.
+This page describes how various proprietary programs harass or annoy
+the user, or cause trouble for the user.  These actions are like
+sabotage but the word &ldquo;sabotage&rdquo; is too strong for them.
 </p>
 
 <div class="important">
@@ -228,7 +227,7 @@
 
 <p class="unprintable">Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2018/12/15 14:02:42 $
+$Date: 2018/12/26 11:44:36 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>