www/proprietary proprietary-drm.html

[Ineiev]

CVSROOT:        /web/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Ineiev <ineiev> 18/06/18 01:45:50

Modified files:
        proprietary    : proprietary-drm.html 

Log message:
        Reword for accessibility.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/proprietary/proprietary-drm.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.24&r2=1.25

Patches:
Index: proprietary-drm.html
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RCS file: /web/www/www/proprietary/proprietary-drm.html,v
retrieving revision 1.24
retrieving revision 1.25
diff -u -b -r1.24 -r1.25
--- proprietary-drm.html        16 Jun 2018 20:35:10 -0000      1.24
+++ proprietary-drm.html        18 Jun 2018 05:45:50 -0000      1.25
@@ -31,9 +31,9 @@
 <ul>
 <li><p>DRM does more nastiness to published works than merely stopping
 people from looking at and/or copying them. Even when it allows you to
-look, it harasses you in many
-ways. <a href="https://boingboing.net/2010/02/18/infographic-buying-d.html";>
-This presents</a> DVDs as an example.</p>
+look, it harasses you in many ways. Cory Doctorow's article presents
+<a href="https://boingboing.net/2010/02/18/infographic-buying-d.html";>
+DVDs as an example</a>.</p>
 
 <p>We condemn the propaganda term &ldquo;pirate&rdquo; when it is
 applied to people that share copies. Many of these DVDs are made and
@@ -270,7 +270,7 @@
 
 <p class="unprintable">Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2018/06/16 20:35:10 $
+$Date: 2018/06/18 05:45:50 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>