www/philosophy words-to-avoid.html

[Ineiev]

CVSROOT:        /web/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Ineiev <ineiev> 17/08/01 00:22:30

Modified files:
        philosophy     : words-to-avoid.html 

Log message:
        Validation fixes.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/words-to-avoid.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.239&r2=1.240

Patches:
Index: words-to-avoid.html
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RCS file: /web/www/www/philosophy/words-to-avoid.html,v
retrieving revision 1.239
retrieving revision 1.240
diff -u -b -r1.239 -r1.240
--- words-to-avoid.html 1 Aug 2017 00:57:52 -0000       1.239
+++ words-to-avoid.html 1 Aug 2017 04:22:28 -0000       1.240
@@ -173,11 +173,11 @@
 applies to the special case in which the user already has a copy of
 the program in non-source form.</p>
 
-<blockquote>Instead of <b>with free software,
-the public has access to the program,</b><br/>
+<blockquote><p>Instead of <b>with free software,
+the public has access to the program</b>,
 we say, <b>with free software, the users have the essential
 freedoms</b> and <b>with free software, the users have control
-of what the program does for them.</b>
+of what the program does for them</b>.</p>
 </blockquote>
 
 <!-- GNUN-SORT-NEXT-ITEM -->
@@ -693,8 +693,8 @@
 neutrality is your goal, &ldquo;FLOSS&rdquo; is better.  But if you
 want to show you stand for freedom, don't use a neutral term.</p>
 
-<blockquote>Instead of <b>FOSS</b><br/>
-we say <b>free software</b> or <b>free (libre) software</b>.
+<blockquote><p>Instead of <b>FOSS</b>,
+we say, <b>free software</b> or <b>free (libre) software</b>.</p>
 </blockquote>
 
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@@ -916,8 +916,8 @@
 are similar to theirs.</p>
 
 <blockquote>
-<p>Instead of <b>open source</b><br/>
-we say <b>free software</b> or <b>free (libre) software</b>.</p>
+<p>Instead of <b>open source</b>,
+we say, <b>free software</b> or <b>free (libre) software</b>.</p>
 </blockquote>
 
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@@ -1316,7 +1316,7 @@
 
 <p class="unprintable">Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2017/08/01 00:57:52 $
+$Date: 2017/08/01 04:22:28 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>