www/proprietary proprietary-surveillance.html

[Richard M. Stallman]

CVSROOT:        /web/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Richard M. Stallman <rms>       17/06/25 08:22:25

Modified files:
        proprietary    : proprietary-surveillance.html 

Log message:
        Minor corrections.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/proprietary/proprietary-surveillance.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.136&r2=1.137

Patches:
Index: proprietary-surveillance.html
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RCS file: /web/www/www/proprietary/proprietary-surveillance.html,v
retrieving revision 1.136
retrieving revision 1.137
diff -u -b -r1.136 -r1.137
--- proprietary-surveillance.html       16 Jun 2017 06:44:36 -0000      1.136
+++ proprietary-surveillance.html       25 Jun 2017 12:22:25 -0000      1.137
@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@
 keyboard, in the mobile computing industry, in the office, at home, in
 transportation systems, and in the classroom.</p>
 
-<h3 id="AggregateInfoCollection">Aggregate Information Collection</h3>
+<h3 id="AggregateInfoCollection">Aggregate or anonymized data</h3>
 
 <p>Many companies, in their privacy policy, have a clause that claims
 they share aggregate, non-personally identifiable information with
@@ -148,7 +148,7 @@
         subpoena.</li>
 </ul>
 
-<p>Therefore, we must never pay any attention to what companies say
+<p>Therefore, we must not be distracted by companies' statements of
 they will <em>do</em> with the data they collect. The wrong is that
 they collect it at all.</p>
 
@@ -1118,7 +1118,7 @@
   </li>
   <li><p>The Amazon &ldquo;Smart&rdquo; TV
       <a 
href="http://www.theguardian.com/technology/shortcuts/2014/nov/09/amazon-echo-smart-tv-watching-listening-surveillance";>is
-      watching and listening all the time</a>.</p>
+      snooping all the time</a>.</p>
   </li>
   <li><p>The Samsung &ldquo;Smart&rdquo; TV
       <a 
href="http://www.consumerreports.org/cro/news/2015/02/who-s-the-third-party-that-samsung-and-lg-smart-tvs-are-sharing-your-voice-data-with/index.htm";>transmits
 users' voice on the internet to another
@@ -1410,7 +1410,7 @@
 
 <p class="unprintable">Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2017/06/16 06:44:36 $
+$Date: 2017/06/25 12:22:25 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>