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From: GNUN
Subject: www/philosophy/po greve-clown.de.po greve-clown...
Date: Sun, 19 Feb 2017 13:59:23 -0500 (EST)

CVSROOT:        /web/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     GNUN <gnun>     17/02/19 13:59:23

Modified files:
        philosophy/po  : greve-clown.de.po greve-clown.fr.po 
                         greve-clown.pot 

Log message:
        Automatic update by GNUnited Nations.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/greve-clown.de.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.25&r2=1.26
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/greve-clown.fr.po?cvsroot=www&r1=1.33&r2=1.34
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/po/greve-clown.pot?cvsroot=www&r1=1.11&r2=1.12

Patches:
Index: greve-clown.de.po
===================================================================
RCS file: /web/www/www/philosophy/po/greve-clown.de.po,v
retrieving revision 1.25
retrieving revision 1.26
diff -u -b -r1.25 -r1.26
--- greve-clown.de.po   18 Feb 2017 08:32:10 -0000      1.25
+++ greve-clown.de.po   19 Feb 2017 18:59:23 -0000      1.26
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
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-"POT-Creation-Date: 2017-02-18 08:26+0000\n"
+"POT-Creation-Date: 2017-02-19 18:56+0000\n"
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@@ -17,69 +17,118 @@
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-msgid "Speech at the CLOWN - GNU Project - Free Software Foundation"
-msgstr "Rede anlässlich des CLOWN - GNU-Projekt - Free Software Foundation"
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-"Speech by Georg C. F. Greve in Paderborn (Germany), 5. 12. 98 at the CLOWN."
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-"Rede von Georg C. F. Greve in Paderborn (Deutschland), 5.12.98 anlässlich "
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+#| msgid "Speech at the CLOWN - GNU Project - Free Software Foundation"
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-"Georg C. F. Greve <a href=\"mailto:address@hidden";>&lt;address@hidden&gt;</a>"
-msgstr ""
-"Georg C. F. Greve <a href=\"mailto:address@hidden";>&lt;address@hidden&gt;</a>"
+"History and Philosophy of the GNU Project - GNU Project - Free Software "
+"Foundation"
+msgstr "Rede anlässlich des CLOWN - GNU-Projekt - Free Software Foundation"
 
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+# | href=\"mailto:address@hidden";>&lt;address@hidden&gt;</a>
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+#| msgid ""
+#| "Georg C. F. Greve <a 
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-"This is a translation of the speech, the <a href=\"/philosophy/greve-clown."
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+#| msgid ""
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+#| msgid ""
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