www/philosophy words-to-avoid.html

[Richard M. Stallman]

CVSROOT:        /web/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Richard M. Stallman <rms>       16/01/02 13:36:40

Modified files:
        philosophy     : words-to-avoid.html 

Log message:
        (CloudComputing): Minor changes.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/words-to-avoid.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.219&r2=1.220

Patches:
Index: words-to-avoid.html
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RCS file: /web/www/www/philosophy/words-to-avoid.html,v
retrieving revision 1.219
retrieving revision 1.220
diff -u -b -r1.219 -r1.220
--- words-to-avoid.html 1 Jan 2016 05:55:21 -0000       1.219
+++ words-to-avoid.html 2 Jan 2016 13:36:39 -0000       1.220
@@ -205,15 +205,16 @@
 used for a range of different activities whose only common
 characteristic is that they use the Internet for something beyond
 transmitting files.  Thus, the term spreads confusion.  If you base
-your thinking on it, your thinking will be confused.
+your thinking on it, your thinking will be confused (or, could we say,
+&ldquo;cloudy&rdquo;?).
 </p>
 
 <p>
 When thinking about or responding to a statement someone else has made
 using this term, the first step is to clarify the topic.  What
 scenario is the statement about?  What is a good, clear term for that
-scenario?  Once the topic is clearly formulated, coherent discussion
-is possible.
+scenario?  Once the topic is clearly formulated, coherent thought
+about it becomes possible.
 </p>
 
 <p>
@@ -1110,7 +1111,7 @@
 
 <p class="unprintable">Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2016/01/01 05:55:21 $
+$Date: 2016/01/02 13:36:39 $
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 </p>
 </div>