www/philosophy applying-free-sw-criteria.html

[Therese Godefroy]

CVSROOT:        /webcvs/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Therese Godefroy <th_g> 15/11/11 12:04:09

Modified files:
        philosophy     : applying-free-sw-criteria.html 

Log message:
        Non-free > Nonfree; remove spurious 'which'.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/applying-free-sw-criteria.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.5&r2=1.6

Patches:
Index: applying-free-sw-criteria.html
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RCS file: /webcvs/www/www/philosophy/applying-free-sw-criteria.html,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -b -r1.5 -r1.6
--- applying-free-sw-criteria.html      10 Nov 2015 19:58:10 -0000      1.5
+++ applying-free-sw-criteria.html      11 Nov 2015 12:04:08 -0000      1.6
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
 their computers, but we should not lead people in the wrong direction.</p>
 
 <p>At a deeper level, we must not present a nonfree program as a solution
-because that would grant it legitimacy.  Non-free software is a
+because that would grant it legitimacy.  Nonfree software is a
 problem; <a href="/philosophy/compromise.html"> to present it as a
 solution denies the existence of the problem</a>.</p>
 
@@ -177,7 +177,7 @@
 <h3>Peripherals</h3>
 
 <p>A computer peripheral needs software in the computer&mdash;perhaps a
-driver, perhaps firmware to be loaded by the system which into the
+driver, perhaps firmware to be loaded by the system into the
 peripheral to make it run.  Thus, a peripheral is acceptable to use
 and recommend if it can be used from a computer that has no nonfree
 software installed: if the peripheral's driver, and any firmware that
@@ -326,7 +326,7 @@
 
 <p class="unprintable">Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2015/11/10 19:58:10 $
+$Date: 2015/11/11 12:04:08 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>