www/philosophy whats-wrong-with-youtube.html

[Therese Godefroy]

CVSROOT:        /webcvs/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Therese Godefroy <th_g> 15/02/18 07:14:26

Modified files:
        philosophy     : whats-wrong-with-youtube.html 

Log message:
        Add a missing full stop, remove a spurious 'the', un-capitalize after 
mdash, remove spaces around mdash.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/whats-wrong-with-youtube.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.13&r2=1.14

Patches:
Index: whats-wrong-with-youtube.html
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RCS file: /webcvs/www/www/philosophy/whats-wrong-with-youtube.html,v
retrieving revision 1.13
retrieving revision 1.14
diff -u -b -r1.13 -r1.14
--- whats-wrong-with-youtube.html       17 Feb 2015 23:14:56 -0000      1.13
+++ whats-wrong-with-youtube.html       18 Feb 2015 07:14:25 -0000      1.14
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
    program</a>.  For some videos, it also requires the nonfree Adobe
    DRM software that has been incorporated into proprietary browsers
    and Firefox, but not into the GNU browsers
-   including <a href="/software/icecat">IceCat</a></li>
+   including <a href="/software/icecat">IceCat</a>.</li>
 
    <li>In the non-HTML5 mode, it involves use of Flash Player, which
    is nonfree.  It even tells users to install Flash Player.  (This
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
 
    <p>There are ways to access most YouTube videos without running
    that nonfree software &mdash; Users who are in the know can avoid
-   doing so. For instance, you can access the most non-HTML5 videos
+   doing so. For instance, you can access most non-HTML5 videos
    with
    <a href="/software/gnash/">Gnash</a>, and you can get most HTML5
    videos with <a href="http://youtube-dl.org/";>youtube-dl</a>.</p>
@@ -124,7 +124,7 @@
 
 <p class="unprintable">Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2015/02/17 23:14:56 $
+$Date: 2015/02/18 07:14:25 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>