www/philosophy imperfection-isnt-oppression.html

[Richard M. Stallman]

CVSROOT:        /web/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Richard M. Stallman <rms>       14/05/27 23:22:54

Modified files:
        philosophy     : imperfection-isnt-oppression.html 

Log message:
        Minor fixes.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/imperfection-isnt-oppression.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.2&r2=1.3

Patches:
Index: imperfection-isnt-oppression.html
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RCS file: /web/www/www/philosophy/imperfection-isnt-oppression.html,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -b -r1.2 -r1.3
--- imperfection-isnt-oppression.html   27 May 2014 13:50:13 -0000      1.2
+++ imperfection-isnt-oppression.html   27 May 2014 23:22:52 -0000      1.3
@@ -28,8 +28,8 @@
   reader may be impossible for you to use. If you speak only Greek, a
   program with menus and messages in English may be impossible for you
   to use. If your programs are written in Ada, a C compiler is
-  impossible for you to use. To overcome these barriers with your own
-  effort is too much to demand of you. Free software really ought to
+  impossible for you to use. To overcome these barriers yourself
+  is unreasonable to demand of you. Free software really ought to
   provide the functionality you need.</p>
 
 <p>Free software really ought to provide it, but the lack of that feature
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@
   the free program's authors for blame for not having done some
   additional work.</p>
 
-<p>What we can do is state that is that completing the job requires doing
+<p>What we can do is state that completing the job calls for doing
   some additional work. That is constructive because it helps us
   convince someone to do that work.</p>
 
@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@
 
 <p class="unprintable">Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2014/05/27 13:50:13 $
+$Date: 2014/05/27 23:22:52 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>