www/philosophy network-services-arent-free-or-n...

[Richard M. Stallman]

CVSROOT:        /web/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Richard M. Stallman <rms>       14/02/01 21:01:17

Modified files:
        philosophy     : network-services-arent-free-or-nonfree.html 

Log message:
        Minor cleanup.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/network-services-arent-free-or-nonfree.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.13&r2=1.14

Patches:
Index: network-services-arent-free-or-nonfree.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /web/www/www/philosophy/network-services-arent-free-or-nonfree.html,v
retrieving revision 1.13
retrieving revision 1.14
diff -u -b -r1.13 -r1.14
--- network-services-arent-free-or-nonfree.html 9 Jul 2013 10:41:30 -0000       
1.13
+++ network-services-arent-free-or-nonfree.html 1 Feb 2014 21:01:16 -0000       
1.14
@@ -20,9 +20,9 @@
 your copy</a> or you don't.</p>
 
 <p>An activity (such as a service) doesn't exist in the form of
-copies, so it's not possible to have a copy or to make copies. As a
-result, the four freedoms that define free software don't make sense
-for services.</p>
+copies, so it's not possible for a user to have a copy of it, let alone
+make more copies.  As a result, the four freedoms that define free
+software don't make sense for services.</p>
 
 <p>To use a culinary analogy, my cooking can't be a copy of your
 cooking, not even if I learned to cook by watching you. I might have
@@ -187,7 +187,7 @@
 
 <p>Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2013/07/09 10:41:30 $
+$Date: 2014/02/01 21:01:16 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>