www/philosophy proprietary-insecurity.html

[Richard M. Stallman]

CVSROOT:        /web/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Richard M. Stallman <rms>       13/10/27 13:44:24

Modified files:
        philosophy     : proprietary-insecurity.html 

Log message:
        Minor rewrite of intro.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/proprietary-insecurity.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.9&r2=1.10

Patches:
Index: proprietary-insecurity.html
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RCS file: /web/www/www/philosophy/proprietary-insecurity.html,v
retrieving revision 1.9
retrieving revision 1.10
diff -u -b -r1.9 -r1.10
--- proprietary-insecurity.html 27 Oct 2013 13:42:57 -0000      1.9
+++ proprietary-insecurity.html 27 Oct 2013 13:44:24 -0000      1.10
@@ -7,14 +7,14 @@
 <h2>Proprietary Insecurity</h2>
 
 <p>This page lists clearly established cases of proprietary software
-whose insecurity has enormous consequences.</p>
+whose insecurity has grave consequences.</p>
 
 <p>It would be incorrect to compare proprietary software with a
 fictitious idea of free software as perfect.  Every program has bugs,
 and any system, free or proprietary, may have security holes.  But
 proprietary software developers frequently disregard gaping holes, or
-even introduce them deliberately, and these cases are particularly
-bad.</p>
+even introduce them deliberately, and <em>the users are helpless to
+fix them</em>.</p>
 
 <ul>
 <li>
@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@
 
 <p>Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2013/10/27 13:42:57 $
+$Date: 2013/10/27 13:44:24 $
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 </p>
 </div>