www/gnu thegnuproject.html

[Jeanne Rasata]

CVSROOT:        /web/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Jeanne Rasata <jrasata> 10/11/12 20:31:50

Modified files:
        gnu            : thegnuproject.html 

Log message:
        added missing words (RMS-approved)

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/gnu/thegnuproject.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.56&r2=1.57

Patches:
Index: thegnuproject.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /web/www/www/gnu/thegnuproject.html,v
retrieving revision 1.56
retrieving revision 1.57
diff -u -b -r1.56 -r1.57
--- thegnuproject.html  12 Nov 2010 18:35:50 -0000      1.56
+++ thegnuproject.html  12 Nov 2010 20:31:48 -0000      1.57
@@ -83,15 +83,16 @@
 share with your neighbor, you are a pirate.  If you want any changes,
 beg us to make them.&rdquo;</p>
 <p>
-The idea that the proprietary software social system&mdash;the system that
-says you are not allowed to share or change software&mdash;is antisocial,
-that it is unethical, that it is simply wrong, may come as a surprise
-to some readers.  But what else could we say about a system based on
-dividing the public and keeping users helpless?  Readers who find the
-idea surprising may have taken proprietary software social system as
-given, or judged it on the terms suggested by proprietary software
-businesses.  Software publishers have worked long and hard to convince
-people that there is only one way to look at the issue.</p>
+The idea that the proprietary software social system&mdash;the system
+that says you are not allowed to share or change software&mdash;is
+antisocial, that it is unethical, that it is simply wrong, may come as
+a surprise to some readers.  But what else could we say about a system
+based on dividing the public and keeping users helpless?  Readers who
+find the idea surprising may have taken the proprietary software
+social system as a given, or judged it on the terms suggested by
+proprietary software businesses.  Software publishers have worked long
+and hard to convince people that there is only one way to look at the
+issue.</p>
 <p>
 When software publishers talk about &ldquo;enforcing&rdquo; their
 &ldquo;rights&rdquo; or &ldquo;stopping <a 
href="/philosophy/words-to-avoid.html#Piracy">piracy</a>&rdquo;, what they
@@ -1026,7 +1027,7 @@
 <p>
 Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2010/11/12 18:35:50 $
+$Date: 2010/11/12 20:31:48 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>