www/gnu initial-announcement.html

[Jeanne Rasata]

CVSROOT:        /web/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Jeanne Rasata <jrasata> 10/06/28 10:43:53

Modified files:
        gnu            : initial-announcement.html 

Log message:
        added headnote rewrite

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/gnu/initial-announcement.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.28&r2=1.29

Patches:
Index: initial-announcement.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /web/www/www/gnu/initial-announcement.html,v
retrieving revision 1.28
retrieving revision 1.29
diff -u -b -r1.28 -r1.29
--- initial-announcement.html   26 Jun 2010 20:59:37 -0000      1.28
+++ initial-announcement.html   28 Jun 2010 10:43:50 -0000      1.29
@@ -12,9 +12,9 @@
 
 <p> The actual history of the GNU Project differs in many ways from
 this initial plan. For example, the beginning was delayed until
-January, 1984.  Several of the philosophical concepts
-of <a href="/philosophy/free-sw.html">free software</a> had not yet
-been clarified.</p>
+January 1984. Several of the philosophical concepts
+of <a href="/philosophy/free-sw.html">free software</a> were not
+clarified until a few years later.</p>
 
 <h3>Free Unix!</h3>
 
@@ -259,7 +259,7 @@
 <p>
 Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2010/06/26 20:59:37 $
+$Date: 2010/06/28 10:43:50 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>