www/philosophy who-does-that-server-really-serv...

[Richard M. Stallman]

CVSROOT:        /webcvs/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Richard M. Stallman <rms>       10/04/20 17:48:29

Modified files:
        philosophy     : who-does-that-server-really-serve.html 

Log message:
        Minor cleanups.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/who-does-that-server-really-serve.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.13&r2=1.14

Patches:
Index: who-does-that-server-really-serve.html
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RCS file: /webcvs/www/www/philosophy/who-does-that-server-really-serve.html,v
retrieving revision 1.13
retrieving revision 1.14
diff -u -b -r1.13 -r1.14
--- who-does-that-server-really-serve.html      14 Apr 2010 11:35:34 -0000      
1.13
+++ who-does-that-server-really-serve.html      20 Apr 2010 17:48:23 -0000      
1.14
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@
 For instance, some proprietary programs are &ldquo;spyware&rdquo;: the
 program sends data about users' computing activities to the program's
 owner.  Microsoft Windows sends information about users' activities to
-Microsoft.  Windows Media Player and RealPlayer report what user watches
+Microsoft.  Windows Media Player and RealPlayer report what each user watches
 or listens to.</p>
 
 <p>Unlike proprietary software, SaaS does not require covert code to
@@ -248,7 +248,7 @@
 a mere commercial relationship.</p>
 
 <p>However, on a longer time scale, we can create alternatives to
-using servers.  For instance, we can create a distributed program
+using servers.  For instance, we can create a peer-to-peer program
 through which collaborators can share data encrypted.  The free
 software community should develop distributed peer-to-peer
 replacements for important &ldquo;web applications&rdquo;.  It may be
@@ -294,7 +294,7 @@
 
 <p>Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2010/04/14 11:35:34 $
+$Date: 2010/04/20 17:48:23 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>