www/distros distros.html

[Richard M. Stallman]

CVSROOT:        /webcvs/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Richard M. Stallman <rms>       09/08/20 03:40:33

Modified files:
        distros        : distros.html 

Log message:
        Minor rewrite.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/distros/distros.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.6&r2=1.7

Patches:
Index: distros.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /webcvs/www/www/distros/distros.html,v
retrieving revision 1.6
retrieving revision 1.7
diff -u -b -r1.6 -r1.7
--- distros.html        24 Jun 2009 07:07:25 -0000      1.6
+++ distros.html        20 Aug 2009 03:40:29 -0000      1.7
@@ -25,10 +25,10 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-If you want to contribute in the most useful way, we suggest that you
-join the development of an existing free distro rather that starting a
-new distro, even if the new one is free.  Each of these existing
-distros could use more development help.
+Each of these existing distros could use more development help.  Thus,
+if you want to make an effective contribution to free GNU/Linux
+distributions, we suggest that you join the development of an existing
+free distro rather that starting a new free distro.
 </p>
 
 <h3 id="distroGuidelines">Free Distro Guidelines</h3>
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@
 <p>
 Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2009/06/24 07:07:25 $
+$Date: 2009/08/20 03:40:29 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>