www/licenses gpl-howto.html

[Karl Berry]

CVSROOT:        /web/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Karl Berry <karl>       07/09/27 22:06:12

Modified files:
        licenses       : gpl-howto.html 

Log message:
        make examples consistent with gpl-3.0.html appendix, ticket 344170

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/licenses/gpl-howto.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.19&r2=1.20

Patches:
Index: gpl-howto.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /web/www/www/licenses/gpl-howto.html,v
retrieving revision 1.19
retrieving revision 1.20
diff -u -b -r1.19 -r1.20
--- gpl-howto.html      13 Jul 2007 23:37:53 -0000      1.19
+++ gpl-howto.html      27 Sep 2007 22:06:07 -0000      1.20
@@ -70,9 +70,9 @@
 look like this:</p>
 
 <pre>
-    This program is free software; you can redistribute it and/or modify
+    This program is free software: you can redistribute it and/or modify
     it under the terms of the GNU General Public License as published by
-    the Free Software Foundation; either version 3 of the License, or
+    the Free Software Foundation, either version 3 of the License, or
     (at your option) any later version.
 
     This program is distributed in the hope that it will be useful,
@@ -84,17 +84,17 @@
     along with this program.  If not, see &lt;http://www.gnu.org/licenses/&gt;.
 </pre>
 
-<p>
-For programs that are more than one file, it is better to replace
-&ldquo;this program&rdquo; with the name of the program, and begin the 
statement
-with a line saying &ldquo;This file is part of NAME&rdquo;.  For instance,</p>
+<p>For programs that are more than one file, it is better to replace
+&ldquo;this program&rdquo; with the name of the program, and begin the
+statement with a line saying &ldquo;This file is part of NAME&rdquo;.
+For instance,</p>
 
 <pre>
     This file is part of Foobar.
 
-    Foobar is free software; you can redistribute it and/or modify
+    Foobar is free software: you can redistribute it and/or modify
     it under the terms of the GNU General Public License as published by
-    the Free Software Foundation; either version 3 of the License, or
+    the Free Software Foundation, either version 3 of the License, or
     (at your option) any later version.
 
     Foobar is distributed in the hope that it will be useful,
@@ -103,7 +103,7 @@
     GNU General Public License for more details.
 
     You should have received a copy of the GNU General Public License
-    along with this program.  If not, see &lt;http://www.gnu.org/licenses/&gt;.
+    along with Foobar.  If not, see &lt;http://www.gnu.org/licenses/&gt;.
 </pre>
 
 <p> This statement should go near the beginning of every source file,
@@ -182,7 +182,7 @@
 <p>
 Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2007/07/13 23:37:53 $
+$Date: 2007/09/27 22:06:07 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 </div>