www/kids free-software-in-your-school.html

[Joakim Olsson]

CVSROOT:        /web/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Joakim Olsson <jocke>   07/05/08 15:16:09

Modified files:
        kids           : free-software-in-your-school.html 

Log message:
        Made better.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/kids/free-software-in-your-school.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.1&r2=1.2

Patches:
Index: free-software-in-your-school.html
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RCS file: /web/www/www/kids/free-software-in-your-school.html,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -b -r1.1 -r1.2
--- free-software-in-your-school.html   8 May 2007 15:03:50 -0000       1.1
+++ free-software-in-your-school.html   8 May 2007 15:16:05 -0000       1.2
@@ -34,19 +34,19 @@
 and distribute, either verbatim or with modifications, either gratis or for a 
 fee. In particular, this means that source code must be available.
 
-Our school can save money with free software. With free software, we are free 
to
-copy and redistribute the software so our school can make copies for all the 
-computers we have.
-
-We can learn about and study how the software works if we use free software. 
-With free software, you always have access to the source code.
-
-Free software is not only good in schools. Free software is always good. If we
-learn how to use free software in our school, we will maybe use free software
-better after we graduate.
+Our school can save money with free software which we are free to copy and 
+redistribute the software so our school can make copies for all the computers 
we
+ have.
+
+We can learn about and study how the software works if we use free software 
with
+ which you always have access to the source code.
+
+Free software is not only good in schools. It is always good. If we learn how 
to
+ use it in our school, we will maybe use it a more effective way after we 
+graduate.
 
 We demand a removal of all the proprietary software in our schools computers 
and
- a we demand a free software replacement.
+ we demand a free software replacement.
 
 Sincerely,
 
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@
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+$Date: 2007/05/08 15:16:05 $
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