Re: Absolute Beginners

[David Rogers]

Geoff Horton wrote:


>> You can analyze the exercise and see that the first note e appears a
>> third above middle c rather than a sixth below; the same happens with
>> the following g in relation to the preceding e; then comes a c a
>> fourth above the g instead of a fifth below, an so forth.
>
>"then comes a c a" is confusing. It looks at first glance as if both
>"a"s are pitches, not the English indefinite article. I can't come up
>with a good way to fix this at the moment...


Change it to "then comes the c that is a fourth above..."

It may be too long, but at least it's clear.

David