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Re: Doc: move non-Western languages to world.itely (issue2735044)
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tdanielsmusic |
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Re: Doc: move non-Western languages to world.itely (issue2735044) |
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Fri, 29 Oct 2010 10:15:46 +0000 |
Looks fine generally, but some editorial changes are needed.
Trevor
http://codereview.appspot.com/2735044/diff/1/Documentation/notation/pitches.itely
File Documentation/notation/pitches.itely (right):
http://codereview.appspot.com/2735044/diff/1/Documentation/notation/pitches.itely#newcode459
Documentation/notation/pitches.itely:459: @item @file{nederlands}
As these and the following similar cases are no longer files I think
@code{nederlands} would be more appropriate.
http://codereview.appspot.com/2735044/diff/1/Documentation/notation/pitches.itely#newcode564
Documentation/notation/pitches.itely:564: Western classical music, also
referred to as @q{Common Practice
It would be good to have a Glossary entry for CPP
http://codereview.appspot.com/2735044/diff/1/Documentation/notation/world.itely
File Documentation/notation/world.itely (right):
http://codereview.appspot.com/2735044/diff/1/Documentation/notation/world.itely#newcode31
Documentation/notation/world.itely:31: traditional musics) employ
alternative or extended tuning
Don't use 'musics' - it's not English. 'Many non-Western styles of
music (and some Western folk and traditional styles) employ ...'
http://codereview.appspot.com/2735044/
- Doc: move non-Western languages to world.itely (issue2735044), v . villenave, 2010/10/29
- Re: Doc: move non-Western languages to world.itely (issue2735044),
tdanielsmusic <=
- Re: Doc: move non-Western languages to world.itely (issue2735044), percival . music . ca, 2010/10/29
- Re: Doc: move non-Western languages to world.itely (issue2735044), v . villenave, 2010/10/29
- Re: Doc: move non-Western languages to world.itely (issue2735044), percival . music . ca, 2010/10/29
- Re: Doc: move non-Western languages to world.itely (issue2735044), Carl . D . Sorensen, 2010/10/29
- Re: Doc: move non-Western languages to world.itely (issue2735044), v . villenave, 2010/10/29
- Re: Doc: move non-Western languages to world.itely (issue2735044), tdanielsmusic, 2010/10/29
- Re: Doc: move non-Western languages to world.itely (issue2735044), Carl . D . Sorensen, 2010/10/29