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[Gnash-commit] gnash/doc/C/usermanual introduction.xml
From: |
Melissa Goldin |
Subject: |
[Gnash-commit] gnash/doc/C/usermanual introduction.xml |
Date: |
Thu, 16 Aug 2007 14:21:09 +0000 |
CVSROOT: /sources/gnash
Module name: gnash
Changes by: Melissa Goldin <mushi> 07/08/16 14:21:09
Modified files:
doc/C/usermanual: introduction.xml
Log message:
Moved a few pieces of information around, added more explanatory text.
CVSWeb URLs:
http://cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/gnash/doc/C/usermanual/introduction.xml?cvsroot=gnash&r1=1.2&r2=1.3
Patches:
Index: introduction.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /sources/gnash/gnash/doc/C/usermanual/introduction.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -b -r1.2 -r1.3
--- introduction.xml 1 Aug 2007 04:59:35 -0000 1.2
+++ introduction.xml 16 Aug 2007 14:21:09 -0000 1.3
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@
<title>Audience</title>
<para>
-This manual is primarily focused on developers interested in contributing to
or building from the &app; project. IT serves as a detailed reference guide,
including a catalog and explanation of all options and features. This level of
detail may make this guide cumbersome for the average user, although advanced
users may find it helpful.
+This manual is primarily focused on developers interested in contributing to
or building from the &app; project. It serves as a detailed reference guide,
including a catalog and explanation of all options and features. This level of
detail may make this guide cumbersome for the average user, although advanced
users may find it helpful.
</para>
<para>
@@ -71,15 +71,6 @@
</para>
</sect1>
-<sect1 id="Organization">
-<title>Organization of This Guide</title>
-
-<para>
-Written Last
-</para>
-
-</sect1>
-
<sect1 id="guide-conventions">
<title>Guide Conventions</title>
@@ -169,10 +160,10 @@
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
<varlistentry>
-<term><replaceable>[replaceable]</replaceable></term>
+<term><replaceable><replaceable></replaceable></term>
<listitem>
<para>
-Whenever a general term is included in an example as a placeholder, it will be
signaled by this formatting. This formatting will usually appear inside other
formatting. For example,
<filename>/home/<replaceable>[username]</replaceable></filename> indicates the
home directory of a user, whose actual username would be substituted in for
<replaceable>[username]</replaceable>.
+Whenever a general term is included in an example as a placeholder, it will be
signaled by this formatting. This formatting will usually appear inside other
formatting. For example,
<filename>/home/<replaceable><username></replaceable></filename>
indicates the home directory of a user, whose actual username would be
substituted in for <replaceable><username></replaceable>.
</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
@@ -188,19 +179,19 @@
</sect1>
-<sect1 id="Acknowledgements">
-<title>Acknowledgements</title>
+<sect1 id="Acknowledgments">
+<title>Acknowledgments</title>
<para>
-The first version of this guide was written by Rob Savoye. If not for his
tireless efforst, this book - and this project - would never have come this far.
+The first version of this guide was written by Rob Savoye. If not for his
tireless efforts, this book - and this project - would never have come this far.
</para>
<para>
-John Gilmore has also been dedicated to the project from the beginning. I have
shamelessly plagiarized one of his early announcement emails in the early part
of this chapter.
+John Steinhart has also been dedicated to the project from the beginning. I
have shamelessly plagiarized one of his early announcement emails in the early
part of this chapter.
</para>
<para>
-Ann Barcomb was instrumental in taking this guide from the 0.3.0 to the 0.4.0
version, incorporating the many changes that came wth &app; version 0.8.0.
+Ann Barcomb was instrumental in taking this guide from the 0.3.0 to the 0.4.0
version, incorporating the many changes that came with &app; version 0.8.0.
</para>
<para>