[Emacs-diffs] /srv/bzr/emacs/emacs-24 r107835: doc/lispref/anti.texi small edits

[Glenn Morris]

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revno: 107835
committer: Glenn Morris <address@hidden>
branch nick: emacs-24
timestamp: Sat 2012-04-14 13:43:11 -0700
message:
  doc/lispref/anti.texi small edits
  
  * doc/lispref/anti.texi (Antinews): Copyedits.  Don't @dfn anything here.
  open-network-stream does exist in Emacs 23, but is simpler.
  
  * admin/FOR-RELEASE: Related markup.
modified:
  admin/FOR-RELEASE
  doc/lispref/ChangeLog
  doc/lispref/anti.texi

=== modified file 'admin/FOR-RELEASE'
--- a/admin/FOR-RELEASE 2012-04-14 20:24:45 +0000
+++ b/admin/FOR-RELEASE 2012-04-14 20:43:11 +0000
@@ -177,7 +177,7 @@
 
 abbrevs.texi      rgm
 advice.texi       cyd
-anti.texi         
+anti.texi         rgm
 back.texi         rgm
 backups.texi      cyd
 buffers.texi      cyd

=== modified file 'doc/lispref/ChangeLog'
--- a/doc/lispref/ChangeLog     2012-04-13 04:18:40 +0000
+++ b/doc/lispref/ChangeLog     2012-04-14 20:43:11 +0000
@@ -1,3 +1,8 @@
+2012-04-14  Glenn Morris  <address@hidden>
+
+       * anti.texi (Antinews): Copyedits.  Don't @dfn anything here.
+       open-network-stream does exist in Emacs 23, but is simpler.
+
 2012-04-13  Chong Yidong  <address@hidden>
 
        * customize.texi (Custom Themes): Also document load-theme etc.

=== modified file 'doc/lispref/anti.texi'
--- a/doc/lispref/anti.texi     2012-04-05 16:52:56 +0000
+++ b/doc/lispref/anti.texi     2012-04-14 20:43:11 +0000
@@ -65,9 +65,9 @@
 Internal windows are no longer visible to Lisp; functions such as
 @code{window-parent}, window parameters related to window arrangement,
 and window-local buffer lists have all been removed.  Functions for
-resizing windows can delete windows if when they become too small.
+resizing windows can delete windows if they become too small.
 
-The @dfn{action function} feature for controlling buffer display has
+The ``action function'' feature for controlling buffer display has
 been removed, including @code{display-buffer-overriding-action} and
 related variables, as well as the @var{action} argument to
 @code{display-buffer} and other functions.  The way to
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@
 The standard completion interface has been simplified, eliminating the
 @code{completion-extra-properties} variable, the @code{metadata}
 action flag for completion functions, and the concept of
address@hidden categories}.  Lisp programmers may now find the choice
+``completion categories''.  Lisp programmers may now find the choice
 of methods for tuning completion less bewildering, but if a package
 finds the streamlined interface insufficient for its needs, it must
 implement its own specialized completion feature.
@@ -123,17 +123,19 @@
 The @var{cache} entry is used internally by Emacs to record equivalent
 keyboard key sequences for invoking the same command; Lisp programs
 should never use it.
address@hidden Not really NEWS-worthy then...
 
 @item
-The @code{open-network-stream} function has been removed, and so has
-the @code{gnutls} library.  Lisp programs that want an encrypted
-network connection must now call external utilities such as
address@hidden or @command{gnutls-cli}.
+The @code{gnutls} library has been removed, and the function
address@hidden correspondingly simplified.
+Lisp programs that want an encrypted network connection must now call
+external utilities such as @command{starttls} or @command{gnutls-cli}.
 
 @item
 Tool bars can no longer display separators, which frees up several
 pixels of space on each graphical frame.
 
 @item
-Many other functions and variables have been eliminated.
+As part of the ongoing quest for simplicity, many other functions and
+variables have been eliminated.
 @end itemize