[Emacs-diffs] emacs/doc/lispintro ChangeLog emacs-lisp-intro.... [EMACS_23_1_RC]

[Glenn Morris]

CVSROOT:        /sources/emacs
Module name:    emacs
Branch:         EMACS_23_1_RC
Changes by:     Glenn Morris <gm>       09/07/06 00:53:14

Modified files:
        doc/lispintro  : ChangeLog emacs-lisp-intro.texi 

Log message:
        (defvar and asterisk): Minor rephrasing.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/emacs/doc/lispintro/ChangeLog?cvsroot=emacs&only_with_tag=EMACS_23_1_RC&r1=1.23&r2=1.23.2.1
http://cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/emacs/doc/lispintro/emacs-lisp-intro.texi?cvsroot=emacs&only_with_tag=EMACS_23_1_RC&r1=1.15&r2=1.15.2.1

Patches:
Index: ChangeLog
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RCS file: /sources/emacs/emacs/doc/lispintro/ChangeLog,v
retrieving revision 1.23
retrieving revision 1.23.2.1
diff -u -b -r1.23 -r1.23.2.1
--- ChangeLog   14 Jun 2009 18:34:43 -0000      1.23
+++ ChangeLog   6 Jul 2009 00:53:13 -0000       1.23.2.1
@@ -1,3 +1,7 @@
+2009-07-06  Glenn Morris  <address@hidden>
+
+       * emacs-lisp-intro.texi (defvar and asterisk): Minor rephrasing.
+
 2009-06-14  Chong Yidong  <address@hidden>
 
        * emacs-lisp-intro.texi (edebug): Fix typo.

Index: emacs-lisp-intro.texi
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RCS file: /sources/emacs/emacs/doc/lispintro/emacs-lisp-intro.texi,v
retrieving revision 1.15
retrieving revision 1.15.2.1
diff -u -b -r1.15 -r1.15.2.1
--- emacs-lisp-intro.texi       14 Jun 2009 18:34:43 -0000      1.15
+++ emacs-lisp-intro.texi       6 Jul 2009 00:53:13 -0000       1.15.2.1
@@ -9465,9 +9465,9 @@
 using @code{defcustom}}.)
 
 When you specified a variable using the @code{defvar} special form,
-you could distinguish a readily settable variable from others by
-typing an asterisk, @samp{*}, in the first column of its documentation
-string.  For example:
+you could distinguish a variable that a user might want to change from
+others by typing an asterisk, @samp{*}, in the first column of its
+documentation string.  For example:
 
 @smallexample
 @group